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Old 03-10-2019, 03:50 PM   #1
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Default an undo space

the undo of the past is the,
undone of the future
undo into the past is,
undone into the future
a undone universe is a undone future
a undone universe is a undone of a undone universe
undone is undo into a undone future

undone is undo into a undone universe
time is undo by time
time is undo by the past
time is undo by the future
time is undo by space
space is undo by space
space is undo by time

undone by space is undo by space
undone by space is undo by time
the future is undone by the future
the future is undone by the universe
the future is undone by space
the future is undo by time
the future is undo by a undo future


author notes : my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc… this poem is about time is undo into time. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.
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I like it!
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I like it!
thank you for the time of day for your review,88butterfly88! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

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