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Default Jun 06, 2019 at 01:37 PM
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I am here, i know that
what do i see?
This world outside of me
Confused, i fear the unknown
seeking safety all i ever known
No control, chaos consumes
The mind warped and thoughts misconstrued
i want to go home... where is home though
Where am i? I dont know...

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Default Jun 06, 2019 at 03:38 PM
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I am here, i know that
what do i see?
This world outside of me
Confused, i fear the unknown
seeking safety all i ever known
No control, chaos consumes
The mind warped and thoughts misconstrued
i want to go home... where is home though
Where am i? I dont know...
love your poem. you might be interested in the creative corner https://psychcentralforums.com/creative-corner/
theres members poems and stories there too
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Default Jun 06, 2019 at 08:16 PM
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Living, striving, failing, abiding
make it stop, if only a moment
trying to own it, get off the lot
into comfort, out of shock
who am i? I'm not sure whats happening
I know not to panic, calm i must remain
am i something devilish? Something crazy and insane?

Playing along, i just dont think i can stand it
control outside, it smiles and we pursue..
Chaos within, fire of desire smokes the internal vision

Severe discomfort, dangerous levels of altered consciousness
feel to be unglued, my self not

Certain skills not achievable, dread and fear presumes
achieve and win, just wish i didnt have to be like this...

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Default Jun 10, 2019 at 11:46 PM
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I try, i fly
i succeed, i accomplish
i fail too, i cry
i dont knew why
there things dont fit
Somehow not right, no that's not it..
Im tired, just need to be rewired
ppl see a liar, but what else is me..?

I want to quit... just make this stop forever please

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