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#181
Bread pudding's in the oven, mmm it's starting to smell good, can't wait to have some for dinner! Yum.
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#182
I got my re-writes done. When I just practiced reading the first one out loud (since I have to make a video, ugh) it made me all teary-eyed. I must be on the right track now. Thanks for the help y'all!
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#183
SD you are breaking my heart over here
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#185
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So the trick really is to balance the formal demands of poetry with communicating to the reader. |
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#186
Probably why I never did a workshopping thing before... my fragile little ego of the past couldn't take it. I can take it now and learn from it.
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#187
__________________ Please NO @ Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live. Oscar Wilde Well Behaved Women Seldom Make History - Laurel Thatcher Ulrich Pain is inevitable. Suffering is optional. |
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#188
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#189
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#190
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#191
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Good memory - I am looking for another job. I only work part-time so hopefully I can find something soon. After tonight's shift I'm on vacation for two weeks Management does need to get someone in that can help me do my job safely. I sent another email to the GM. They really like me so hopefully they take it seriously. They need to either get a new night auditor or allow me a second security guard for my shifts - or both! |
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#192
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I hope you enjoy your vacation! |
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#193
Dont mind me, im just settin over here watchin a stallone-schwarzenegger prison escape movie
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#194
It's done! It will sink still but I couldn't wait to take a pic haha it smells so good.
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#195
Sent T an update last night thanking him for session and said how I’m doing ok, plus a bit more than that. Kinda wished he’d sent a “glad to hear that” or something, but I imagine I’m expecting too much...
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#196
In my stupid googling of my exT I came across a very personal piece of writing of his it made me wonder if I should alert him to the fact that it is google-able with just his name and modality or should I leave it? It is personal about his use of rituals now I am too scared to google him I didn't really want to know anything that personal
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#197
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__________________ Please NO @ Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live. Oscar Wilde Well Behaved Women Seldom Make History - Laurel Thatcher Ulrich Pain is inevitable. Suffering is optional. |
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#198
If I might make one more suggestion - rewrite and then wait and look at them again at least one more time before sending. I find reading out loud to be useful in terms of flow, rhythm, and word choice.
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I was influenced by a lesbian novel - This is Not For You by Jane Rule early in my coming out novel reading phase. Then of course Bright Lights, Big City was also fun. __________________ Please NO @ Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live. Oscar Wilde Well Behaved Women Seldom Make History - Laurel Thatcher Ulrich Pain is inevitable. Suffering is optional. |
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#200
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Yep. Definitely. They aren't due until tomorrow night 11:59pm. eta but I have to work OT tomorrow so wanted to get most of the work done today. Last edited by Anonymous43207; Jun 15, 2019 at 08:55 PM.. |
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